Construction

I’ve responded to the feedback from my peers, I trust their judgement as they’re editing magazines too and have done their research just like I have.
I have cleared up the messy layout making it easier to look at, removed the messy border with the different colour greys and added more grey in but of the same colour
I have kept the blue in for now but I’m going to use photoshop to see what it looks like with red which is a more rocky colour